Great Conversations, Greater Wasps

A year ago, I sent Jake Russell a poem of mine for review, and he did something he had not done previously. He responded with a poem: “Sans Ephesus” or “a poem critiquing your poem,” as he described it – a conversation.
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Praise for Great Conversations, Greater Wasps

A year ago, I sent Jake Russell a poem of mine for review, and he did something he had not done previously. He responded with a poem: “Sans Ephesus” or “a poem critiquing your poem,” as he described it – a conversation. One brief passage from “Sans Ephesus” is transparent to this origin: the narrator describes how “two men chronicle the same / event, return with diff’rent manuscripts.” I imagine Horace Smith after writing “On a Stupendous Leg of Granite…” and then scanning the text of Shelley’s “Ozymandias” for the first time; Jake had written a twisted yet resonant reflection of my experience. Shelley writes, in his “Defense of Poetry,” that “Poetry is a mirror which makes beautiful that which is distorted.” But Jake’s poetry is not mere reflection. Each poem is a filter that at times reverses the process Shelley describes, distorting the inherent beauty in an image. While it is impossible to sum Jake’s process or style (he is one of the most prolific and diverse writers I know), to consider this balance of distortion and beauty is, perhaps, an adequate entry into this excellent first collection of poetry.

—Joey Lemon

“Man, is she good. Allie Marini Batts writes with a dream-fevered style that is both sharp and poised, and as all great poets should, makes the reader her bitch.”

—Brian A. Ellis

 

“This collection of poems range from recollections of childhood to marital woes, all with power and poise. Some of the poems in this collection, like “centering” and “Gravewatchers,” seem to falter a bit in the trickery they employ. Batts is at her best when the poems are less intricately wrought, and so the poems that play with language and form tend, to this eye, to work at cross purposes to the personal connection she has with the events and emotions of the poems. However, when Batts eschews these embellishments, and engages in Wordsworth’s “powerful emotion recollected in tranquility” she is undeniably accomplished. Poems like “What You Will Remember” and “Jennifer in Five Acts” recall a past that is chronologically removed, but still salient and powerful. They are past, but very much still present; personal, but also very universal.”

~ C. Sabatelli

Jake Russell

About the Author

Jake Russell has published in Emerge Literary Journal, Open Window Review, and The Weekenders Magazine. He has also published fiction in Bellows American Review and is slated for Moon Hollow Press. He is currently a Master of Fine Arts student at Wichita State University, studying poetry and a reader for The Literary Underground, Mojo and Mikrokosmos.

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